1) What feedback did my peers give me:
They liked what I talked about as in the points I mentioned including the crime slide where I was told I made valid points about what I talked about with the knife and acid attacks. However they also thought that I wasn't specifically talking about what my London is to me and what it means to be living here.
2) What were my strengths?
My strengths included me being very open about what I spoke about and saying how London is a 'Slum' area for many people who do not live luxurious lives.
3) What were my weaknesses?
My weaknesses included being too fast while I'm speaking which made it harder to present as for the audience it made it seem as if I am mumbling and gave them a bit of misunderstanding of what I was saying.
4) How can I now start to create MY LONDON story
I can now build on the feedback received by my peers and also things I said about London such as how I referred to it as a 'slum' and start going forward from there to think of more ideas about why I said it is a 'slum' to prove it to others who may not be from London, or East London at least.
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